Thursday 14 February 2013

Flash fiction two


The burglary

Mac hadn’t seen his family whilst in prison. For ten years his cell heard his cries and captured his regrets. The impact on his life was greater than he could have foreseen.

 “Mac we need to get back, move” ordered Jay

“Okay, okay I’m coming, just one more grab” he replied.

 I hope this will be the last one, prayed Mac, eventually ill have enough money to visit my kids, I’ll be dad again. He snatched the item, knocking a lamp over and began to leave. The resident awoke from his slumber to investigate, Mac in a state of panic hit the man repeatedly until his groans of pain could be heard no more. The two held their bags brimming with loot and ran.  They clambered into the front seats and set off into the darkness. Pulling up to a battered old house, they jumped out, grabbed the bags and hastily walked into the house.
Mac confessed to Jay about the man, in hopes he would understand. He didn’t.

“You bloody idiot! Shouted Jay, you hit him? How could you be so stupid?”

Mac didn’t answer. His face was pale and his palms sweaty.

“That’s it we’re done for… Finished!”

Mac still didn’t answer his eyes fixed on the blue lights flashing through the bay window. Then came the words that all criminals fear… “Police let us in!”

 

That night haunts Mac; he fears it always will, for he took a man’s life and in some ways ended his own.

 

Word count: 250


 

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